Wednesday 27 November 2019

Week 7 Reading Task

WALT Combine prior and new Knowledge to come up with new Ideas

For This week We are reading a story called the Stag. And for this task we had to Make a Trap so that we didn't have to kill animals this is my Trap.

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Manuk! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!

    Wow Manuk! I love your drawing! It looks awesome! I like the way you added labels too, so we can see which is which! The colours are a good touch too. It adds a really big pop of colour!

    You know, Stag is an interesting name for a book! I wonder what it's about! Judging by the activity you had to do, It probably is about animals, because, I mean, why would you do an activity based on animals if the book was based on cars?

    Next time, to improve, you could try to make the labels more clear, so I can read it easier. And, another thing is that the lighting isn't very good. But, I'm just nit picking. Good job!

    Keep up the good work!

    From Hana

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  2. Hi Manuk,
    I really like how you have colored all of this. THis is really nice and it does remind me of a forest. NExt time you could explain more because I don't get it at all except for the pictures

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  3. Hi Manuk,

    I really like how you have added pictures to show what you have done. Maybe next time you could write what it said on the paper because it was kind of hard to read but you did good on your post.

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