In Class for writing we have been doing some Collab writing and we were in groups of three when we were in our groups of three the first thing that we had to do is that we had to write a story using scholastic story starters and then when you got your topic you had to write a story in a group each person had to do a slide and then the last slide for the solution you had to work on it together.
Then after that you had to make a picture book and you were supposed to add pictures to the picture book so then it will be like a real book so this is my groups picture book
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Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
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Friday, 13 September 2019
Friday, 30 August 2019
Group Writing
In class for Writing we have been doing group writing Mrs Lee gave us a topic my groups topic was a spider that was in a shoe so then in groups of 3 we had to each have a slide and make a paragraph each or two and we had to the the problem and solution but for the solution we worked on it altogether
And this is my groups story Its name The Amazing Fat Spider Man.
Tuesday, 27 August 2019
My Season Writing
WALT Summer writing
In class we had to write
on what our favourite season is my favourite
season is summer and
I have made a piece
of writing telling you why I like
summer. I also Made my own
Symbol on summer
on what our favourite season is my favourite
season is summer and
I have made a piece
of writing telling you why I like
summer. I also Made my own
Symbol on summer
Don’t you hate it when you are shivering in the winter and when your waiting inside
for the rain to stop raining.
for the rain to stop raining.
Well that’s why I like Summer,
its hot but it’s better than winter cause you can go outdoors and you don’t have to
be held inside your house.
be held inside your house.
Here are some reasons I like Summer.
I like Summer because, you can play a lot of sports, and the weather is always good. So
you don’t need to stay
you don’t need to stay
inside and miss out on fun
because you are inside.
Summer
is also very good because their is a lot of sun and you can sweat to cool yourself off.
You can also play a lot of games
and you can be active
You can also play a lot of games
and you can be active
at all times because
it is very warm outside, and you don’t have to stay inside. Summer is the
best because that's the time when Cricket
best because that's the time when Cricket
starts and I like Cricket and you can still do other sports in Summer. Summer
is a time to do a lot of sports. Summer is also in
is a time to do a lot of sports. Summer is also in
the HOLIDAYS!!! So you don’t have to worry about school all the time.
You can invite you classmates over and you can play sports in the
sun because it’s not cold so your not going to get
sun because it’s not cold so your not going to get
sick
If you are not that good at your school work you might be very good at P.E
so that means in the Summer you can always do P.E .
so that means in the Summer you can always do P.E .
Your Parents might say that you play
too much video games
but in the Summer you won’t need to play video games because you can
play outside in the shining sun.
play outside in the shining sun.
Summer is the best season because you can go camping with your family
you can spend more time with your family outdoors because
there is no coldness
to ruin your time. If your family members come from a different country
and you want to show them around, Summer is the
best for showing your relatives
around because they don’t
have to just stay
indoors watching TV.
you can spend more time with your family outdoors because
there is no coldness
to ruin your time. If your family members come from a different country
and you want to show them around, Summer is the
best for showing your relatives
around because they don’t
have to just stay
indoors watching TV.
Summer is also good because if you do get to hot their is always Ice cream
around to cool you and if you eat ice cream in the
cold you could get sick. If you eat ice cream
you can cool off from all the sweat and heat around you.
around to cool you and if you eat ice cream in the
cold you could get sick. If you eat ice cream
you can cool off from all the sweat and heat around you.
Summer is also good because Summer is in the Christmas so that means that on
Christmas day your not stuck inside you can
celebrate outside with your family and friends.
Christmas day your not stuck inside you can
celebrate outside with your family and friends.
That is why I like Summer in conclusion I like Summer its hot it’s fun
and you can hang around with your friends all the time.

and you can hang around with your friends all the time.
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