Group Writing

In class for Writing we have been doing group writing Mrs Lee gave us a topic my groups topic was a spider that was in a shoe so then in groups of 3 we had to each have a slide and make a paragraph each or two and we had to the the problem and solution but for the solution we worked on it altogether 

And this is my groups story Its name The Amazing Fat Spider Man.

Week 6 Shared Slideshow

In class we have still have been doing the shared slideshow for our reading and this is 

my Week 6 one and these are the comments I got

:Hi Manuk I really like how there's a lot of information. You could of said what emotions he was feeling

: Hi Manuk, I like how you have explained all the characters. Next time could you tell us what emotions were in the story.

My Season Writing

WALT Summer writing

In class we had to write
on what our favourite season is my favourite
season is summer and
I have made a piece
of writing telling you why I like
summer. I also Made my own
Symbol on summer

Don’t you hate it when you are shivering in the winter and when your waiting inside
for the rain to stop raining.

Well that’s why I like Summer,

its hot but it’s better than winter cause you can go outdoors and you don’t have to
be held inside your house.

Here are some reasons I like Summer.

I like Summer because, you can play a lot of sports, and the weather is always good. So
you don’t need to stay

inside and miss out on fun

because you are inside.

Summer

  is also very good because their is a lot of sun and you can sweat to cool yourself off.
You can also play a lot of games
and you can be active

at all times because

it is very warm outside,  and you don’t have to stay inside. Summer is the
best because that's the time when Cricket

starts and I like Cricket and you can still do other sports in Summer. Summer
is a time to do a lot of sports. Summer is also in

the HOLIDAYS!!! So you don’t have to worry about school all the time.

You can invite you classmates over and you can play sports in the
sun because it’s not cold so your not going to get

sick

If you are not that good at your school work you might be very good at P.E
so that means in the Summer  you can always do P.E .

Your Parents might say that you play

too much video games

but in the Summer you won’t need to play video games because you can
play outside in the shining sun. 

Summer is the best season because you can go camping with your family
you can spend more time with your family outdoors because
there is no coldness
to ruin your time. If your family members come from a different country
and you want to show them around, Summer is the
best for showing your relatives
around because they don’t
have to just stay
indoors watching TV. 

Summer  is also good because if you do get to hot their is always Ice cream
around to cool you and if you eat ice cream in the
cold you could get sick. If you eat ice cream
you can cool off from all the sweat and heat around you.

Summer  is also good because Summer  is in the Christmas so that means that on
Christmas day your not stuck inside you can
celebrate outside with your family and friends.

That is why I like Summer in conclusion I like Summer  its hot it’s fun
and you can hang around with your friends all the time.

Reading Slideshow

For Reading we had to do a shared slideshow on info graphs we had to use our information and then make a info graph on the story you are working on I am working on Hurricanes and this is my info graph 

Comments

:Hi Manuk, I like how you have explained all the detail. When I made my one I did one the slideshow. Next time could you add some information about the eye.

:Hi Manuk, I really like how you putted images that related to your Idea. Next time I think you should set it out more neatly so next time I can understand which is the first idea and so on.

Eucharist Symbol

Walt identify how the celebration of the Eucharist is a sacrifice 

 In Class we have been learning about the Eucharist and for our task we had to draw the symbol of Eucharist and then write a bible verse that is relevant to the symbol you have made 

W4 Reading Slideshow

In Class for reading we had to make a mindmup of all the details of the story that you are reading and then you put it on this slideshow this is my W4 and W2 one.
The Feedback I got is this

:hi Manuk I really like how you have put the text in your own words. Next time you could say who was feeling what

:Hi Manuk, I like your story web. It has a whole lot of detail, especially the setting. Next time you could work on the characters.

:Hi Manuk! I really liked how you Added a lot of information for each of the types of things you need to add and I liked how you were really specific. Next time I think you should add something that could make me understand more.

Adding Fractions

Walt Use add/sub to work out fraction of set 

For Maths we have been learning fractions so our task was to teach others how to add/sub fractions I have made a slideshow. When I first learnt fractions they were very difficult for me but I have learnt but it is still difficult but I have improved. What have you learnt?

Sacraments of Initiation

In Class we have been learning the sacraments of initiation which is Baptism, Confirmation, Eucharist. So I have made a slideshow about all of the Sacraments so You will know what they are

Psalms Poster

For Morning Prayers we have been praying a different way we would look at a Psalm then we would choose a verse and we make our own Psalms with all the verses combined so for Reading we had to take our Psalms and make a poster this is my one.

T3 Psalms

In class we are learning a different way to pray Mrs Lee our teacher has shown us a way the the way is by looking at a psalm from the bible and choosing some verses and you choose the ones that you think are good. I have made a slideshow of all the verses I have chosen.