Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 25 May 2020

Pick a Path Story

For Writing we were making pick a path story I chose one of my favourite childhood cartoon Tom and Jerry, We had to make it with google Forms Hope you like it.

Friday, 6 March 2020

ANZAC Diary Entry

WALT Use descriptive language.
Ms Wilton Read us a story called The Anzac Violin, The story is about a person called Alexandra and he likes his violin and he had it with him all the time and when he went to war he brought his violin,
and the task was to make a attributes chart; See, Hear, Location, Movement & Temperature. Then we had to make a diary entry using our attributes chart this is mine.



As I lay on the ground I can feel the pain going all through my body. I can see soldiers on the ground just like me, also seeing Enemy soldiers running around me, I can hear comrades yelping for help everywhere and enemies shouting. All around me is dust dust dust making me cough and muddy grounds. There are moving bullets going past me fast that I barely see them and soldiers running past me. My temperature is burning cold and my wounds are stunning. As the war kept going I slowly started following the stars to the base. Once I got there I got treated by doctors and recovered but I was never going to go back to the cruel War ever.

Something I enjoyed was doing the attributes chart and putting all the words in the right
place,

Something I found hard was using the attributes chart to make the diary entry.

Thursday, 5 December 2019

Reading illustration

For Reading this week We were reading a story about a Artist so we had to use his tips and make a drawing from a story. My Story is the Chracter Description were I choosed to describe Spongebob.
So I am going to show some sentences from my writing then show the Picture I drew.



Spongebob is a crack up sponge Just like a comedian. His finest friends are patrick and squidward but squidward is always going BLAH BLAH BLAH. He works at the Krusty krab in Bikini Bottom. And of course no one can forget the almighty gary the snail. He is also outstanding at making Krabby patties.

This is my picture of spongebob.


Tuesday, 3 December 2019

Christmas Poem

For writing this year we have been learning about a lot of things today we got to choose any kind I chose Poems, There about Christmas.

Cold In the America but Warm in New Zealand 
Happy that Hotness is Coming 
 Receiving Presents
 Involving in Activities 
Solving Presents 
Talking with Family 
 Making Fun 
Asking silly questions
 Search the land


This is my Second one


Snow
 White shiny
 Throwing Crying Yelling
Ill Through Big Snowballs Hard

Thursday, 28 November 2019

The True Story of Hansel and Gretel

Last Friday Rooms 4, 5 and 6 went to a Performance in the City to watch the Ballet hansel and Gretel. Unforuntatly We only got to watch one half of the Performance because we didn't have time to go back to school. So the next week we had to Make our own story about Hansel and Gretel But  there is a Twist we can change the story how ever we want. This is my story

 ツThe true story of Hansel and Gretelツ Once upon a time there was a boy named Hansel and a girl named Gretel they were brother and sister they had a mum and dad that loved giving Spankings with a belt. One day Hansel and Gretel was being very nauty, and then their mum heard. Mum was the most Meanest Dad not so much. “COME HERE NOW HANSEL AND GRETEL” Screamed Mum “Pssst Gretel mum is coming with the belt lets hide” Whispered Hansel “Yeah” said Gretel “COME OUT WHEREVER YOU ARE” Screamed mum. “RUNNN” Screamed Hansel “RIGHT” said Gretel “I'VE GOT YOU NOW MWAHAHAHAHA” Screamed Mum “NO NOT THE BELT” Screamed Hansel. The next day “Gretel I've Had enough of this I am Going to run from home” said Hansel “Me Too I'm coming with you” Said Gretel “KIDS BREAKFAST IS READY” Screamed Dad “Now it's our time to go” Said Hansel “Get the bread and put it in the bag and run” Demanded Hansel “Alright” said Gretel “I got the bread Lets go” said Gretel “Follow me Gretel” Said Hansel. Ten Minutes of Running later “I think we have gone far enough now” said Hansel “Gretel did you put the bread crumbs down like I told you to do” said Hansel “Oops I forgot” Said Gretel “Tell me you Brought the Belt with you” asked Hansel “Yep I did” said Gretel “Im Hungry” said Gretel “OH LOOK A LOLLY HOUSE” Screamed Hansel “LET'S EAT IT UP” said Gretel “IF THERE IS ANYONE IN THERE THEY WILL GET A Spanking” said Hansel “Yeah Me Too” said Gretel “Get Your stomachs Ready” said Hansel. “Im ready” said Gretel 1 Minute of eating later. “HEY WHO IS EATING MY HOUSE” Screamed the Witch “Oh I don’t Feel Good” said Gretel “I will give that lady a Spanking with the belt” said Hansel “I think I ate too much,” said Gretel “A BELT MY WORST NIGHTMARE” Screamed the witch “HAHAHA YOU CAN'T DEFEAT THE BELT” said Hansel “You kids eat my house just don't give me a Spanking” said the witch “Hansel I need Water Lots of it” Said Gretel “WATER NOW OR SPANKING MRS WITCH” Demanded Hansel. “alright Sir” said the witch “I want to go home now Hansel I miss Dad” Said Gretel “Well Shouldn’t Dad be looking for us if he cared” Said Hansel “Mum Definitely Doesn't care” said Gretel “Yeah” Said Hansel “Let's Ask This witch for Directions” Said Gretel. “I will ask” “HEY WITCH” said Hansel “Yes Sir” said Witch “Lead us to the Town” Said Hansel “Alright follow me” 10 minutes following later “Here you go sir The Town” said The Witch “Thank you now BE GONE” Demanded Hansel “Now Gretel Lets go home Dads Probably Looking for us” Said Hansel “Alright then” said Gretel. “Look it's our house” said Hansel “Let's go in” Said Gretel “WHO'S THAT LADY THAT IS WITH DAD?!?!?!” SCREAMED HANSEL. “AND WHERE IS OUR OLD MUM” said Gretel “Lets GO AND FIND OUT” Said Hansel “DAD WHO IS THIS” screamed Hansel “This is your new Mum” Said Dad “WHAT” Screamed Hansel. “Hello You must Be Hansel and Gretel” Said Step Mother. “YOU FAKER I HATE YOU SLAP!!!!” Said Hansel After that Incident I was Never allowed to go next to mum or talk to her again. The End. ツツ

Wednesday, 13 November 2019

Plankton the Chum Owner

Once upon a time there was a Town called Bikini Bottom It was a town Under sea. With civilians of all types Sponges, Fish, Squid, Star fish, crab, Pufferfish and all kinds of different Fish. But one of the worst Civilians is Spongebob Squarepants. He wears Square Pants he is yellow. His best friend is Patrick the Star and another one of his friends is Squidward. He works at a place called the Krusty Krab It was the best Restaurant in the town, and spongebob was the Best fry cook ever he could make a bazillion Krabby Patties.

“Hey Spongebob
” Hi Patrick ``
''Spongebob you want to play a game I'm bored” Said Patrick
 “Sure Patrick What do you wanna play” Replied Spongebob
“ I don't know” said Patrick
 Do you want to play Hide N Seek?” Asked Spongebob 
” what's that” asked Patrick
 “Baaaaaaaa You don't know what Hide N seek is”? Said spongebob 
” Nope” Said Patrick
 “Cmon Patrick We always play it” Wonders Spongebob 
” We do?” Asked Patrick
 “Yes Oh no I'm late for work I will play with you when I come back” Shouted Spongebob 
“ ok”. Said Patrick.

“Hello Krusty Krabs” said Spongebob
 “Oh c'mon why is The Moron Spongebob here” Said Squidward 
 Hey Squidward What's up” Said Spongebob 
“Just ignore Just Ignore” Wined Squidward 
” Baaaaaaaaaa” Said Spongebob 
 “SPONGEBOB MAKE KRABBY PATTIES THIS CUSTOMER WANTS SOME” Said Squidward.

 ''Ok Squidward coming up” said spongebob 
 Here you go my fellow customer. Thank you. 
“SPONGEBOB ONE KRABBY PATTY” Said Squidward
 Ok Squidward” Order Up” Here you go customer one Krabby Patty.

The arch Nemesis Of the Krusty Krabs was THE CHUM BUCKET. The owner of it Named Plankton Always tries to steal the Secret formula that can make Krabby Patties. But the owner of The Krusty Krabs, Krabs Never Lets him because he guards it. 
(by the way Krabs likes Money) 
The Chum Bucket Selled things called Chum Burgers inside was CHUM. The worst things ever to eat. (no wonder he didn’t get any customers) And Plankton had a Secret His wife was a Computer and she helped Plankton Steal the Secret Formula But They Failed Heaps of times, and the computers name is Karen.

“Karen Give me a hand here I need to get my Telescope” ok Plankton” What KRABS IS MAKING A NEW MENU CALLED DELUXE KRABBY PATTIES
” Well Plankton Why don't you just try to remember how to make a Krabby Patty” Said Karan.
 “I DON'T REMEMBER THAT'S WHY I AM STEALING IT” Screamed Plankton
 (Krabs And Plankton used to be friends and they both Worked together to make the Krabby Patty But Plankton wanted to be evil with it so Krabs didn’t let him take it) “Oh ya I forgot YOUR EVIL” Said Karan.

Ok Karen I got an Idea I will make a CHUM Attack Plane. That will fire on the Krusty Krabs and if they destroy the Plane It will turn into a Tank, and if they destroy that It Will turn into a MEGA CHUM ROBOT.‘That Might actually be a good plan Said Karan. But how are you going to Make those three things Said Karan. 
“Oh I didn’t think about that one” Oh Well At Least Your Married to A Computer” Said Plankton
“True” Said karan. 
“Its READY” Shouted Plankton
“Spongebob He has a Plane Get TO YOUR STATIONS” Yelled Krabs 
“ YES SIR” Said Spongebob 
“Mwahahahaha YOU LIKE SOME CHUM KRABS?” Yelled Plankton 
“Get The Tomato Sauce canon Ready” Demanded Krabs 
“OH NO TOMATO SAUCE MY WORST ENEMY” screamed Plankton
BOOM!!!! CRASH!!?!?!? KABOOM!?!?!?
Owww I failed again 

“I like these Fireworks” Said Krab
“ Me too Krabs me too” Said Spongebob
“Finally My Shift is over” Said Squidward
“ Oh Noo I forgot about Patrick” Said Spongebob 
“YOU LIAR YOU DIDN'T”T COME I'M GONNA GO CRAZY” Said Patrick
As spongebob and patrick Argued through the night.

Meanwhile at the chum bucket 
“Karan the Chum Plane didn’t work”
“It was made out of plastic” Said karan 
“Do you think I'M RICH OR SOMETHING” Screamed Plankton
“I'M A COMPUTER YOU CAN USE ME TO MAKE TITANIUM” Said Karan

Meanwhile at the other side of the road(krusty Krab) Krabs was having a shower with his beloved money. 
10 minutes of money shower later
“AaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAa That plankton is suffering” said Krabs 
“Another day of money” Said Krabs 

The End. BaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaA ツツツツ

Friday, 1 November 2019

Descriptive Writing

For writing we are doing Descriptive writing and we had to describe pictures using different types of descriptive writing methods one of them is Repetition. 

SpongeBob Description

For writing we are doing descriptive writing. and we had to make a burger that was our plan. Then we had to write it on a doc and we had to add four ways to type. One of them is onomatopoeia. we also had to do this in buddy. This is my writing.


 He is as yellow as the sun. It's The Yellow Sponge  That can squeeze all the way down and also has mini pits in him. He is a Magical Sponge that can’t get hurt. His Signature is the unbelievable SPONGEBOB DUN DUN DUHHHH!!!!!

Spongebob is a crack up sponge Just like a comedian. His finest friends are patrick and squidward but squidward is always going BLAH BLAH BLAH. He works at the Krusty krab in Bikini Bottom. And of course no one can forget the almighty gary the snail. He is also outstanding at making Krabby patties. 

He is Dazzling yellow. Where's a Magnificent suit and a Foolproof tie. Also always has his Unique Spatula, and he also wears black Glossy shoes that are magical. He is also very short and square Shaped. 
He wears the same clothes every single day. 

SpongeBobs has a little pickle with Plankton Because he annoys Spongebob for the Unknown Formula. He also sometimes has a predicament with the flying dutchman who is a ghost pirate and also king neptune who is the emperor of the ocean and shoots lasers with his trident that go BANG!!!. 

In conclusion spongebob is an insane magical sponge who lives in a pineapple under the sea. He is also a horrible civilon in Bikini Bottom but makes the Supreme Krabby Patties to make up for it. He is a Sponge that squeezes and splashes everywhere.













































Tuesday, 26 March 2019

There, Their, They,re

WALT Identify and use homonyms correctly
in class for writing we had to describe was the there, their and they,re meant and we had to show what it meant when you have done reading my poster. Write a comment telling me what the there, their, and they,re means.
Quiz:
1. What does all the there's mean?
2. use all the there's in a sentence
3.What does They're stand for
4. What is the difference from there and their 

Thursday, 15 November 2018

Fight for gold

I woke up my friend Frogadeir who was fast asleep to eat . My name is Pickachu and my friend is
Frogadeir. He rescues me and I rescue him. We have been besties for a long time. We love to save the day, that’s me and Frogadeir. The next day we were playing checkers but the table was shaking! It fell down on me and Frogadeir. We rushed outside of the house near the forest to the driveway. We saw Charzard the dragon pokemon. It was a boy dragon firing at me and Frogadeir. I tryed to help but I got hit on the leg I coulden’t move and then I yelled in pain. But Frogadeir got to me and then charzard disappeared and Frogadeir bought me to the pokemon center to get me healed. Frogadeir told me that the charzard was getting contralled by THE ROBOT one of the robots that spawn pokemon but it became evil. So me and frogadeir knew what to do DESTROY IT before it becomes a big problem. Me and frogadeir went over were the robot was going but it spoted us so frogadeir used water bomb.But the robot doged it and then I used iron tail.To finish him off but the robot spawned pokemon before I could even use it on the robot then I got the idea me and frogadeir was going to attack the robot at the same time I called out 3 2 1 GO!! We both attacked and kaboom it exploded into bits I was proud of froagadeir and froagadeir was proud of me The End.

Wednesday, 17 October 2018

The New Church

At St Bernadette's school We have a church but it got rebuilt because of leaks it started in end of the 2017 and now it has finished in 2018.

 The New Church When I was in the line to go to the new church I was very excited when I Saw the entrance I thought it was cool but then I looked to my left and to my right but there was not holy water but then when we got into the church the holy water was in middle and there was the sun shining on it I already knew that the new church was better than the old one the seats were more comfortable and it was warm and cool there was a Mary statue and St. Bernadette they came from France they looked very cool and the Church was much bigger. The church was much better. It looked like a whole new church but it was just rebuilt father said that there was two trees and Jesus was the body of the tree and we were the branches. This is what I think of the new church.

Wednesday, 19 September 2018

Caught in the Storm

Caught in the Storm

One day at school there was a boy named Manuk. that day there was a storm. his classmates were scared 6 times. It hailed then we had to go home while i was leaving my car got stuck. In the water then i had to walk then the pavement was flooded then i was really scared then i saw a duck floating on the water i was thinking this must be the ducks lucky day because the duck can go nearly anywhere because there is was storm/flood but the people had a really unlucky day even the houses were flooded then we had to go to high ground but then i heard a lighting bolt i saw it hit one of the houses the house was on fire!!! Then more thunder hit it was a horrible day all the people had to stay on high ground or boats/rafts after the storm stopped all the houses were broken the people had no place to live then all of a sudden it started to hail then it was worst the storm started again it was so bad that even it spreaded to riccarton,rolleston,hei hei,upper riccarton everywhere was a storm it was really bad we had to go far away from christchurch because there is a huge storm and a lot of people died because of the storm but the ducks it's there luck day now the ducks have taken over christchurch!!! It should be called duckchurch all the ducks came to duckchurch there was no more people at christchurch soo everyone left and went to a different country and Manuk goes to Australia and goes to melbourne then soon ducks took over the whole south island then north island it was really bad ducks might take over the whole world(dramatic music)no more people the ducks ruled the world they mad storms and floods everywhere and then all humans turned to ducks expect Manuk but then a huge tsunami washed away all the ducks and then all the ducks turned back to humans all because of the tsunami but then the unlucky day started AGAIN all day raining and cold but all the houses were rebuilt so if it starts to have a storm go to your house but it was hailing like millan's and raining the whole day raining raining raining never ending rain it was like -9 that's how cold it felt because the storm stopped Manuk had to go back to school because the storm stopped when he went back it started to rain again to be continued...

The Killer Clown

The Killer Clown
Penny wise attacks the humans(this is a horror story )

  One day in a creepy forest three boys were 
walking there names are Jake, Jon and Jeff They were trying to go to there grandfathers house but when they were walking they saw a shadow Jake said the person in the shadow had a chainsaw they all were getting scared they changed their mind he what to go back to home but they don't remember where home is they were getting really scared then all of a sudden the clown killed Jake but Jon and Jeff didn't see what happened to Jake they both saw jakes blood they looked at their map they were going to go hop but then ssszzzsszzsz Jon died the clown came and killed Jon Jeff thought he was going to die but then he saw is house and then he said to his parents that Jon,Jake died there parents were really sad but then all of a sudden penny wise came and killed Jeff's parents and then Jeff Ran away he tried to contact the police but he was to scared that penny wise might get him so Jeff went to his house and he hid and he called the cops the police where coming to get PENNY WISE Meanwhile Jeff saw PENNY WISE IN HIS BACKYARD!!!!! Jeff hid and penny wise entered the house(Kreeeeek) the door slammed and the cops arrived Jeff ran outside where the cops where he hid behind them but then Penny wise smashed a cop and another but Jeff got in the cop car and escaped but was penny wise done? To Be Continued……….

Friday, 14 September 2018

Thursday, 26 July 2018

The Red Pill

With Mrs Lee we did a piece of writing One day a boy called jack was having a walk with his family then all of a sudden i lost then i was really worried i was running everywhere then i tripped over and i was anxious Then when i woke up there was a little creature a smurf the smurf can you help me with something the boy said i will do it the smurf said that jack has to catch one catfish Jack caught one he gave it to the smurf and then the smurf said thank you here choose one of these pills they give you powers the smurf explained to me all the abilities i picked the red pill good choice the red pill makes you run fast and makes you regenerate but this only lasts for 24 hours said the smurf jack had to hurry to find his family he ran everywhere then he saw a human he ran to him and he found a family member It was his little brother jackjack Jack put jackjack on his back then they continued to search he ran around everywhere it has already been 4 hours he only has 20 more hours left then he approached a tiger the tiger was chasing him then the tiger bit off jacks hand but it regenerated fast then jack lost the tiger luckily he only has 12 hours left he had to hurt kaboom there was a rino in pursuit the rhino knocked all the trees boom boom boom!! AHH said jackjack Jack spotted the rest of the family they were getting carried by a eagle jack had to climb a mountain to get to the family he noticed he only had 10 hours left gulp i don't know if we'll make it said jackjack Oh we will said jack then where at the top but the eagle bring them to another spot oh no this is not good the rhino was still in hot pursuit but avanchily they lost the rino only 9 hours left jack went has fast as he could go he jumped and tried to grab the family and he missed by a inch jack and jackjack fell down but they were alright 6 hours left they were getting really worried jack saw a ramp he used it to get onto the mountain the eagle was bringing the family there was 3 hours left and the eagle was not even close to the mountain the time was running out the eagle was nearly there but there was only 1 hour left the eagle landed and there was 10 seconds left jack quickly used his fastness to tangel the eagle then Boom the pill ran out but luckily he rescued his family from the eagle and thanks to the smurf jack and jackjack have saved there family from dying but then the eagle broke out of the string but the smurf came flying down and he used his wand to make the eagle disappear the smurf said thank you for getting my wond back thank you for saving my family said jack The End.

Monday, 25 June 2018

My School Report

W.A.L.T Write a report about our school

In Room four we are learning to write a report about our school and how awesome it is so this is my report about my school.


Friday, 12 January 2018

The first Settlers

                                                       The First settlers

The first people that came to New zealand were from polynesia and they settled  700 years ago they were coming from many different countries. They accomplished  to live together ultimately organized  their own specific culture known as [Maori] they have their own language and traditions.  

Walt writing about Maori people