I was a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I sahred my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 22 November 2018
quickwrite 22/11/2018
Chapter 1: Rexy
I Woke up I saw a dinosaurs in front of me licking my hair I turned around and there was beuty everywhere I was in a dinoswar world. When I went to the mirror I saw my hair gloomy and wet. I took a shower and once again I saw the beutiful world. I was ready for a adventure but I knew I was missing somthing a sidekick. I need a T - REX I went on a hunt to find a T rex and to tame it and it will be mine. But first I need to find one before I tame it. I went down the steep hill and I saw one it was beautiful I knew what I was going to name it. Rexy I gave Rexy a bone Rexy started like me and I kept giving her bones. Then she was tamed. We went back to my base/home and we started to make armour. My armour was diamond and Rexy’s was ruby. We then went on a journy to discover new dinosars. It wasn’t going to be easy because some dinoswaurs might attack me but luckily I have rexy to protect me. When I was on that journey I also found a diamond sword for me to defend my self from angry dinosawrs.
Chapter 2: It starts now
To Be countunuied
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