This week for Reading we are doing the story about Earthquakes and this is my shared slideshow and these are the feedback that I got from my reading Group
:Hi Manuk I really like how you have added when the first earthquake happened Because I didn't think of that. Next time you could add more information on like the different ways that earthquakes can happen
:Hey Manuk, I like how you have a lot of information. How do you know when the first earthquake happened it wasn't in the explanation. Next time could you change the background it's too destructing.
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