Friday, 30 August 2019

Group Writing

In class for Writing we have been doing group writing Mrs Lee gave us a topic my groups topic was a spider that was in a shoe so then in groups of 3 we had to each have a slide and make a paragraph each or two and we had to the the problem and solution but for the solution we worked on it altogether 
And this is my groups story Its name The Amazing Fat Spider Man.
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  1. Anonymous4 September 2019 at 13:36

    Hi manuk
    Im Toby from yms
    I like the way that you added the wole dtory at the end becouse it makes sence. Why did you do spider-man
    Were ther any group arguments?

    Yors sincerly
    Toby

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  2. Anonymous4 September 2019 at 13:36

    Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I liked the way you showed me your amazing story that you worked on with some friends.

    When I read you post I learnt about your cool fat spiderman character. He's very funny.

    To improve, you could always add some more description about the characters like what they looked like. Good job on what they smelled like though.

    Bye! Keep up the good work.

    -Amelia 😉

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