Wednesday, 18 September 2019

W9 Reading Task

This week for reading we are reading a non - fiction text so that means that instead of making a story map you have to make a infographic  this week and this is my infographic 
The things that was hard for me was Understanding the text
Something fun was showing how it works
something I could work on could be that I could describe more about the topic.  



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  1. Anonymous18 September 2019 at 12:23

    Hi Manuk, I really like how you have a lot of detail. I really like how you used piktochart. Did you forget to add in what happens everyday, how a high tide comes an hour later after the day before. Apart from that, I really liked your infographic.

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    1. Anonymous23 September 2019 at 14:37

      Hello Tyler,
      Thank you for giving me some feedback next time I will add more info on what happens.

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  2. Anonymous19 September 2019 at 10:12

    Hi Manuk I really like that you always have a diagram for one different comment. Next time you could use your own words not the words in the story

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    1. Anonymous23 September 2019 at 14:38

      Hello Petelo,
      Thank you for giving me some feedback and I will Make up my own words. Thanks for commenting

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  5. Anonymous19 September 2019 at 13:37

    Hi manuk
    I like that you add some images of the moon and arrows to show where you read next. Did it take you long to make it? Next time you chould make the words bigger? ( I had trouble reading it )

    Yours sincerely
    Toby

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    1. Anonymous23 September 2019 at 14:39

      Hello Toby,
      Thanks for all the Feedback I will make it much bigger. Thanks for Commenting

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  6. Anonymous23 September 2019 at 14:16

    Hi Manuk, I really like how you added lots of Diagrams to show how like the moon causes a tide and it's good to add lots of Diagrams so maybe kids who are like 5 years old understand. Nice thinking about adding arrows and lines to show like it causes a tide because I never thought of putting arrows or lines I might do that next time though. Something to work on is probably adding more so like what Tyler said how a tide comes an hour later after the day before. But over all your infographic was very detailed.

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  7. Anonymous23 September 2019 at 14:18

    Hi Manuk,
    I like your post it is really good I like how you added pictures of because it matchs your texts, I forgot that the sun helps a little bit your reminded me, I like this blog post but I would make the writing bigger But it is good,
    good job

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