:Hi Manuk, I really like how you have a lot of detail. I really like how you used piktochart. Did you forget to add in what happens everyday, how a high tide comes an hour later after the day before. Apart from that, I really liked your infographic.
:Hi Manuk I really like that you always have a diagram for one different comment. Next time you could use your own words not the words in the story
:Hi Manuk, I really like how you added lots of Diagrams to show how like the moon causes a tide and it's good to add lots of Diagrams so maybe kids who are like 5 years old understand. Nice thinking about adding arrows and lines to show like it causes a tide because I never thought of putting arrows or lines I might do that next time though. Something to work on is probably adding more so like what Tyler said how a tide comes an hour later after the day before. But over all your infographic was very detailed.
:Hi Manuk,
I like your post it is really good I like how you added pictures of because it matchs your texts, I forgot that the sun helps a little bit your reminded me, I like this blog post but I would make the writing bigger But it is good,
good job
Something I enjoyed was Making the Info Graphic
Something I could work on is put more Diagrams Of how it happens.
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you said what is at the bottom of the sea.
The facts you have used are really good.
Maybe next time you could write a little bit more about what is at the bottom sea.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)
Hi Manuk, I really like how you had a lot of detail. Compared to mine, you have more image's because I don't know how to use piktochart as much as you. Next time you could add more detail.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mykiala here from Yaldhurst.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great blog.
I love the way you have explained it more.
Just a heads up I think you could tell us a tinch more.
Great job.
Mykiala!!!!!!!!