In Class for reading we had to make a mindmup of all the details of the story that you are reading and then you put it on this slideshow this is my W4 and W2 one.
The Feedback I got is this
:hi Manuk I really like how you have put the text in your own words. Next time you could say who was feeling what
:Hi Manuk, I like your story web. It has a whole lot of detail, especially the setting. Next time you could work on the characters.
The Feedback I got is this
:hi Manuk I really like how you have put the text in your own words. Next time you could say who was feeling what
:Hi Manuk, I like your story web. It has a whole lot of detail, especially the setting. Next time you could work on the characters.
:Hi Manuk! I really liked how you Added a lot of information for each of the types of things you need to add and I liked how you were really specific. Next time I think you should add something that could make me understand more.
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