Thursday, 29 August 2019

Week 6 Shared Slideshow

In class we have still have been doing the shared slideshow for our reading and this is 
my Week 6 one and these are the comments I got

:Hi Manuk I really like how there's a lot of information. You could of said what emotions he was feeling

Hi Manuk, I like how you have explained all the characters. Next time could you tell us what emotions were in the story.


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