In class we have still have been doing the shared slideshow for our reading and this is
my Week 6 one and these are the comments I got
:Hi Manuk I really like how there's a lot of information. You could of said what emotions he was feeling
: Hi Manuk, I like how you have explained all the characters. Next time could you tell us what emotions were in the story.
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