This week we are reading a story called the Big Jump and it is a Fiction story. So our task was to make a Very Scary Flying fox. Because in the story the kid named Big Daddy was too scared to go down the flying fox.
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Thursday, 31 October 2019
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Hi Manuk these are really cool drawings and cool features in the flying fox. Next time can you show that writing on the paper I can't really see that.
ReplyDeleteAnnyong Manuk,
ReplyDeleteI like the explanation. The picture is a bit blurry. Maybe you could create it on a Google Drawing and screenshot it so it is easier to see. Thank you for your time!
Tweeny
Hi Maunk, I really like how you explained the task. The picture was a little bit blury. Maybe next time you could write the paragraph in your description. Other than that you did Good!
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