Something I enjoyed was Making the Story Web
Something That was hard was getting the Information
and something I could work on is put more Detail
Wednesday, 16 October 2019
T4W1 Story Web
For The First Week of Term 4 we are reading a Book called Zookeeper for a day Its a non- fiction book so we have to make a story Web because it is a Non-Fiction
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Hi mauk this is really good and has a lot detail. Next time you could add the zookeeper in the middle because it was hard finding out how what you were writing about.
ReplyDeleteHi Manuk, This is a really good information web. I like how you added in a lot of detail. I also like how you made it easy for people on your blog to read the words. Maybe next time you could put a textbox in the middle and writing the title.
ReplyDeleteGood Job!