Wednesday, 19 September 2018

The Killer Clown

The Killer Clown
Penny wise attacks the humans(this is a horror story )

  One day in a creepy forest three boys were 
walking there names are Jake, Jon and Jeff They were trying to go to there grandfathers house but when they were walking they saw a shadow Jake said the person in the shadow had a chainsaw they all were getting scared they changed their mind he what to go back to home but they don't remember where home is they were getting really scared then all of a sudden the clown killed Jake but Jon and Jeff didn't see what happened to Jake they both saw jakes blood they looked at their map they were going to go hop but then ssszzzsszzsz Jon died the clown came and killed Jon Jeff thought he was going to die but then he saw is house and then he said to his parents that Jon,Jake died there parents were really sad but then all of a sudden penny wise came and killed Jeff's parents and then Jeff Ran away he tried to contact the police but he was to scared that penny wise might get him so Jeff went to his house and he hid and he called the cops the police where coming to get PENNY WISE Meanwhile Jeff saw PENNY WISE IN HIS BACKYARD!!!!! Jeff hid and penny wise entered the house(Kreeeeek) the door slammed and the cops arrived Jeff ran outside where the cops where he hid behind them but then Penny wise smashed a cop and another but Jeff got in the cop car and escaped but was penny wise done? To Be Continued……….
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 10:57

    hey manuk i like how you sayed they did not know i liked that i liked how you made it discribible and for you wish in stead of died maybe thaey were dead and there blood came out of there shoulder because pennywise bited there hand off and for meanwhile do a lower case m thank bye uso

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  2. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 11:03

    Hi Manuk, I really like your story, I gave me goosebumps. maybe next time you could check if it makes sence?

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    1. Anonymous17 October 2018 at 12:03

      Thank you Greer for commenting on my post I have checked if it make's sense.

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  3. Thilini25 September 2018 at 16:37

    Hello Manuk,
    Good job I think your story is amazing. Maybe next time you could check if the spelling is right everything else is amazing great job

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  4. Anonymous15 November 2018 at 14:23

    Ki ora Manuk, I like your story. It is very fun to read. My wish is that you should add pargraths.

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