Caught in the Storm
One day at school there was a boy named Manuk. that day there was a storm. his classmates were scared 6 times. It hailed then we had to go home while i was leaving my car got stuck. In the water then i had to walk then the pavement was flooded then i was really scared then i saw a duck floating on the water i was thinking this must be the ducks lucky day because the duck can go nearly anywhere because there is was storm/flood but the people had a really unlucky day even the houses were flooded then we had to go to high ground but then i heard a lighting bolt i saw it hit one of the houses the house was on fire!!! Then more thunder hit it was a horrible day all the people had to stay on high ground or boats/rafts after the storm stopped all the houses were broken the people had no place to live then all of a sudden it started to hail then it was worst the storm started again it was so bad that even it spreaded to riccarton,rolleston,hei hei,upper riccarton everywhere was a storm it was really bad we had to go far away from christchurch because there is a huge storm and a lot of people died because of the storm but the ducks it's there luck day now the ducks have taken over christchurch!!! It should be called duckchurch all the ducks came to duckchurch there was no more people at christchurch soo everyone left and went to a different country and Manuk goes to Australia and goes to melbourne then soon ducks took over the whole south island then north island it was really bad ducks might take over the whole world(dramatic music)no more people the ducks ruled the world they mad storms and floods everywhere and then all humans turned to ducks expect Manuk but then a huge tsunami washed away all the ducks and then all the ducks turned back to humans all because of the tsunami but then the unlucky day started AGAIN all day raining and cold but all the houses were rebuilt so if it starts to have a storm go to your house but it was hailing like millan's and raining the whole day raining raining raining never ending rain it was like -9 that's how cold it felt because the storm stopped Manuk had to go back to school because the storm stopped when he went back it started to rain again to be continued...
hi manuk i like how you made it so describible like ducks expect what they want like drippy blood and i like how you did also how you said dramatic music like scary and for your I do a capital
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