Wednesday, 6 November 2019

W4 reading Work

For reading we are reading a nonfiction book called a bit of a bang. So our task was to make a bunker that was volcano proof. and this is my one.

 Something I enjoyed was drawing the pictures 
Something I didn't like was getting ideas 
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 November 2019 at 10:43

    Hi Manuk! This is a great drawing!

    Something I really liked about this bunker was that it looks very spacious and like a normal house so it could make people feel like there at home. I also like how you put in labels in your bunker to show what everything is!

    Maybe something you could add is some color to the drawing and maybe to make the labels more clear use permanent marker or pen but that was also something I struggled with to.

    Keep Up The Good Work!
    ~Siale

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  2. Anonymous8 November 2019 at 12:09

    Kia ora Manuk, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I liked the way you put a picture of the volcano proof bunker you made. I also like the way you said what you liked and disliked.

    This reminds me of when I did work similar to this for my reading work.

    To improve, you could make the house not be there are make a steel trap door instead so the lava can't burn it down.

    Why did you make this picture how it is?

    Bye Manuk, keep it up!

    -Amelia 🦊

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