There once was a boy named Bob he was a pirate looking for gold. But his arch enemy wants it too
soon he and to get rid of him his name is Luke. His crew isn’t very good but Luke can fight well like me but my crew is better. So I set sail to the forbidden island that's where all the goods are at but when I arrived at the island I saw Luke and his crew. Me and my crew started to follow Luke so we can ambush them. We kept following them until they came to a dead end and Luke noticed someone was behind him. So I get my sword out and I fight Luke and my crew took down Luke’s crew and I slammed my sword into his sword and it flings away. Luke lost so my crew tie up Luke and his crew and we put them in there boat and we started to walk to the treasure that belongs to me Captain Bob. So he follows the map he has and he found the treasure he opens it up with the key he get from Luke and inside was gold.Millions of it my crew carries it to our ship and we head back home but the our boat didn't move the gold was too heavy for the boat. So we tipped some out but it still didn’t move so my crew had to push the boat and its started to move but later on it started to sink because we were getting fired at from Luke's ship. I tried to fire back but Luke’s ship broke our cannons. We had to go in the emergency boat and escape I regret taking that much gold. He said as he watched all the money sinking the end.
I was a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I sahred my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 20 February 2019
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