The Red Pill

With Mrs Lee we did a piece of writing One day a boy called jack was having a walk with his family then all of a sudden i lost then i was really worried i was running everywhere then i tripped over and i was anxious Then when i woke up there was a little creature a smurf the smurf can you help me with something the boy said i will do it the smurf said that jack has to catch one catfish Jack caught one he gave it to the smurf and then the smurf said thank you here choose one of these pills they give you powers the smurf explained to me all the abilities i picked the red pill good choice the red pill makes you run fast and makes you regenerate but this only lasts for 24 hours said the smurf jack had to hurry to find his family he ran everywhere then he saw a human he ran to him and he found a family member It was his little brother jackjack Jack put jackjack on his back then they continued to search he ran around everywhere it has already been 4 hours he only has 20 more hours left then he approached a tiger the tiger was chasing him then the tiger bit off jacks hand but it regenerated fast then jack lost the tiger luckily he only has 12 hours left he had to hurt kaboom there was a rino in pursuit the rhino knocked all the trees boom boom boom!! AHH said jackjack Jack spotted the rest of the family they were getting carried by a eagle jack had to climb a mountain to get to the family he noticed he only had 10 hours left gulp i don't know if we'll make it said jackjack Oh we will said jack then where at the top but the eagle bring them to another spot oh no this is not good the rhino was still in hot pursuit but avanchily they lost the rino only 9 hours left jack went has fast as he could go he jumped and tried to grab the family and he missed by a inch jack and jackjack fell down but they were alright 6 hours left they were getting really worried jack saw a ramp he used it to get onto the mountain the eagle was bringing the family there was 3 hours left and the eagle was not even close to the mountain the time was running out the eagle was nearly there but there was only 1 hour left the eagle landed and there was 10 seconds left jack quickly used his fastness to tangel the eagle then Boom the pill ran out but luckily he rescued his family from the eagle and thanks to the smurf jack and jackjack have saved there family from dying but then the eagle broke out of the string but the smurf came flying down and he used his wand to make the eagle disappear the smurf said thank you for getting my wond back thank you for saving my family said jack The End.